Sep | 1st Dev Log & Character Design Share-Out
Hey everyone!
So, September's been all about hammering out the Chap 2&3. I figured I'd drop an update every 2 weeks to keep track of my progress so I can feel encouraged(???).
-- But hey, who decided to work solo on a huge project? |•'-'•) ✧
For the past 2 weeks, almost every day after work, I've spent 4~5 hours on writing the story, which is fun but also very tiring since I am not really good at writing ahahaha. And during weekends, I spent ~8 hrs per day on it... it is just crazy(; ´_ゝ`)
Anyway, the good news is, I've finally wrapped up the 1st draft of chap 2&3!
Honestly, finalizing the outline wasn't easy, but actually writing it was even harder -- another thing is Chap 2&3 is longer than I expected.
But overall, I'm happy that I've at least written out all the plots I wanted to include in the chapters. There were several nights when I practically forced myself to write something just to get the story done, so the first draft isn't as satisfactory as I'd like, but taking the first step is better than nothing.
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Also, I've been doing a lot of thinking about character creation and story development while writing. Since this is my first time creating a visual novel, I have to say, reaching a satisfactory state is a bit challenging. (°⌓°)
Edmund and Hendrix were the characters I designed right from the beginning of TROT, they were initially designed as MC's college classmate not childhood friends. But as I worked on it, allowing them to grow from children to adults, these characters changed a lot.
Initially, they were just adaptations from characters in two Shakespeare plays (if you have noticed...). Hendrix's design was influenced by Hamlet, but I make him more gentle and cheerful when he is younger. As for Edmund... if you've noticed, Edmund and Edgar, are inspired by 2 characters with the same names in "King Lear". Edmund has always been a character I really like in all the Shakespeare plays. I mean, he's complex, with clear desires and life philosophies which I find very interesting. But now, with my creation, Edmund is becoming more like himself and not just a simple copy of a Shakespeare character.
Here are some of their early designs since I think it is fun to look back:
Left: 2019 - very early stage design | Right: 2022 - early concept sketch
A very early design for Hendrix back in 2021 (I don't even remember I ever drew this...and he is blonde???? What was I thinking back then???)
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And by the way, Edmund and Hendrix will get new sprites in the 3rd chapter – they've grown up! During C016 ~ C017, they'll look like this:
They are just so cute, ehehehe.....(๑ ꒪ꌂ꒪๑) I can't wait to draw&date them ahhhhh
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In short, although it's been tough -- these two weeks of writing have made me reflect on a lot of things and understand more about the characters I've created. I'm really excited to see how chapters 2&3 will turn out.
I've also realized that writing romance plot can be really cringe for me (haha). I hope future edits will make it feel more natural!
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For the next two weeks, my plan is to polish and finalize the 2nd draft, possibly making it the final script! And then I will also import all the background images, music, animation effects, and sprite placeholders!
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Alright, that's a wrap for this update. Hope you enjoy the read~(●´∀`●)
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Romance VN. Let's meet at the end of time.
Status | In development |
Author | Cherish |
Genre | Visual Novel |
Tags | Dark, Dating Sim, Horror, Mystery, Otome, Romance, Story Rich, Time Travel |
More posts
- October | CG Art Coming Soon!20 days ago
- September | Another Step Closer To Act 2's Release!51 days ago
- August | Happy 1st Anniversary! 🎉83 days ago
- July | NEW SPRITES & Release Plan for the Rest of 2024Aug 02, 2024
- June | Act 2 Script 1.0 Finished + New Sprite ToolsJun 29, 2024
- May | Progress Update and Art ShareMay 30, 2024
- April | Finished Scripting for Hendrix & Edmund's Routes 🎉May 01, 2024
- March | Back To WorkApr 02, 2024
- Dec | Postmortem & 2024 Dev PlansDec 15, 2023
- Act 1 now released!!!Dec 08, 2023
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Congrats on finishing the first draft of Chapter 2 and 3! Hopefully you got a good break after all that hard work!
Really love seeing all the characters' early designs and how they changed from back then until now! I'm not too well versed in Shakespeare's works, but knowing where you got the inspiration from the character is really interesting. I can also relate well with feeling cringe when writing romance, you look back at it and feel absolutely embarrassed by what you just wrote LMAO. But I'm sure you'll be able to make it feel natural and cute!
Thank you for the update and I'm looking forward to the next one! Good luck and take good care of yourself! :D
Wow -- your reply always makes me so happy hahaha(//▽//) I hope I can take some time to relax this weekend, but very likely I will just keep working non-stop from next week.
Writing romance is tricky since you need to make sure it is good, cute, but also fits with the characters' current relationship stage and personality. If it is a complex character, romance might become angst — and eventually into something else in the end. But that is also the fun part ehehehe :D
Hope you have a great day! :)