I LOVE the proactive MC!!! I created this account to give favorable review to TROT.
MC of TROT is very tough and strives to solve the difficulties. She has experienced many losses. The black coat she wears sometimes reminded me of Eddie's green jacket in Silent Hill 2.
The nonlinear narrative enables the theme of story to be contained within the structure. I really enjoy piecing together the storylines bit by bit. The act 2 gave me a very immersive and intense emotional fluctuation experience.
Can't wait to play act 3!!! TROT has been added to my wish list!!! Gotta get more people to play TROT!!!
made and account just to comment because HOLYYY no other VN has ever made me feel my entire range of emotions in one sitting, i'm super super looking forward to leon's route!!!
I've recently gotten into VNs and this will be my first review ever only for this game. The plot, storytelling, characters, music and art? Beautiful. I can't wait for Act 3!!! I am in love with this hidden gem! Thank you so much for this, Cherish!!!
Each routes for the LIs are heartbreaking as it is heartwarming. T^T
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAABFIEO2HS9FNEIOSBDIWNRJEI FUCK ME THIS WAS SO GOOD!!!!! SOOOOOOO GOOD JESUS FUCKINF CHRIST I KNDISOAJFISOEJUDIRIEIE
I AM. SO EXCITED FOR ACT 3 YOU DONT EVEN KNOWWWWW
IM GONMA LOSE MY MIND
Edit: ok I posted that right after finishing act 2 so I was very excited but im calm now. This is a genuinely amazing game, Im a stone cold bitch but it made me cry multiple times haha, that's practically unheard of. I love it sosososo mmuch. thank you cherish for sharing this with the world
So much love was poured into the production of this game, and it’s even more impressive that it’s by a sole creator. Thank you so much Cherish! The art is absolutely delicious and is what hooked me (besides the pretty boys of course ><) but I stayed for the story and characters. I love all of the love interests and the interactions they have with Fay, I was always giggling and kicking my feet. They’re all so cute gosh.
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and then I was shot 87 times
but seriously, I’m surprised this isn’t more popular. Again, thanks so much for this.
I don't usually write a comment or reviwe but for this i just thought I HAVE TO
This game is AMAZING!! The storytelling? Amazing, The character writing? Amazing. The art? Amazing! All of it was perfection and I genuinely can't wait for Leon's episode to be released, the moment it drops I'm going to smack all my money into it. This is by far THE best VN I've ever read, I've been replaying it over and over again and at this point I haven't found another VN that has left me as satisfied as this one has! I hope that after this game you plan on doing more in the future! I'd love to see whatever else you can come up with! Thank you so much for this gem of a game, this is true peak writing and I couldn't ask for anything better. I truly love all the characters and can put myself into their shoes quite a lot, which isn't exacctly a good thing but imo it can help people cope with their own issues and make them see that they're not alone so thank you!
I ASKED HOW FAR WE ARE THEN THEY SHOWED ME THIS THAT'S WHEN I REALIZED THAT WE WERE AT PEAK PEAK WRITING PEAK ART PEAK VN DARE I SAY ONE OF THE BEST VNS I'VE EVER PLAYED I MEAN, WHERE IS THE CROWD??!!
SPOILER WARNING BELOW!!
Firstly, it took me a very long time to realize that Lisa was a delusion. After choosing that Lisa would be with us forever, I didn’t need to check her profile cuz I thought it was something like our friendship had bonded even more strongly than before. After seeing her a couple of times in irrelevant places, or those “we came to the cafe alone” lines, though having conversations with Lisa, I finally realized the shattering truth. That completely alone made me sob for 15 mins.
AND FREYA AND CICI WLW
THAT WAS UNEXPECTED This was so well written.
DOOMED YURI AT ITS FINEST
I couldn’t blame Cici after all. It is normal for her to mix memories after a traumatic experience. After all, the mansion has been nothing but good memories to her all this time. She has always searched for love; she believed in love, and Freya, who seemed like the most unlovable, has opened her heart for her.
I HATE THOMAS SM. I can’t blame Freya for hating Edmund cuz in her eyes, he is what ruined Cici, what took Cici from her.
And Edgar noticed that her mom was loving someone besides him, even more than him, which made him believe that he was not the real one she loved, so after Cici’s death, he perceived her mother’s love as just grief towards Cici; that love was not meant to be his.
ABSOLUTE CINEMA
I can’t say the same for Maria, though. While reading through her diary, still after her 30s, she still seemed like a teenager, chasing through her childish dreams and ignoring what life is really about, avoiding responsibilities.
Focusing only on herself, trying to charm everyone around her to achieve her goals.
She has never considered Hendrix.
I am glad that at least Fay was around with him his whole childhood, so that he never had to face her real side before.
I mean, she loves Hendrix, but she cares about her goals more. That's what tore that family apart. Maria is guilty. AND GOD DAMN I HATE CLAUS SM HE RUINED MY POOR HENDRIX HE DIDN'T DESERVE ANY OF THIS OMG AND EDMUND
His backstory was pitiful; he had gone through so much in the environment he grew up. To look after her mom, to hear her ramblings about the mansion, all that love bullshit, and still decoying in that small house, poor, desperate.
We can’t blame Edmund.
Even after returning to the mansion, he still had to face difficulties all over again. Especially with Thomas trying to ruin him.
AND THEY FUCKING DIED WHEN THEY WERE JUST ABOUT TO BE SAVED
OH AND FOR NOAH
Selfless baby xx
My favorite one, who would willingly sacrifice himself for our sake, and did.
His love was out of this world. Fay was his savior, the girl of dreams. A dream where you wake up with nothing, inspired by Fay. He chased that dream. He wanted to hold onto her, the only person who accepts him for who he his. They are both strange, as Fay said.
The ending where we abandoned him to death… omg…
And tbh after all we did, I still wanted to let go of the time machine regardless…Yes, I wished to save them, change the past, save Fay’s fate, and end her suffering. But as Noah said, sometimes we let life continue. That’s human nature itself.
I don't wanna sacrifice one person to save two.
THE TROLLEY PROBLEM WAS INSANE
LIKE THE PRINCESS STORY HENDRIX HAD WROTE
The princess who left her place to pursue freedom, only to find everything had vanished, destroyed.
Then went on a long journey to end the curse.
Only to lose herself in the process, no one in the world would remember her.
So much like Noel…
aaaand HERE COMES LEON
BTW I WANNA MENTION THAT WHILE WE WERE IN DUSK WE SAW NOAH AND FAY GOING TO THE ADOPTION CENTER
BUT IN REALITY WE NEVER DID…
STRANGE
Like those memories, Leon aka Noah(was so obvious from the start, still somehow left me shocked)
Our Noah had dreams?? of us talking about getting adopted by rich parents??
Leon had more???
Us helping him to get out of the locker??
Us playing chess with him??
Him recording our brainwaves???
The memory where we name ourselves Leon and Noel, which Noel has somehow remembered???
HE INVENTED THE FREAKIN TIME MACHINE JUST FOR US
AND IN THE END HE CAME FOR US
AHH THAT GUY IS ROMANTIC AF And I wonder what exactly happened at the Christmas of ‘08
ig its related to our lost memories AND THE PERFECT WORLD WHERE LISA EXISTS
SUCH A PLOT TWIST
IDK HOW IS THAT EVEN POSSIBLE
I REMEMBER THAT WE FOUND SOME RESEARCH ABOUT LISA IN LEON’S ROOM, BUT IDK
And mark my words, Lana’s probably dead in this world, just like us. Cuz Noel was the one who let her stay in her house that night.
AND AS FOR FAY, SHE DIDN'T DESERVE ANY OF THIS MY GIRL NEEDS A BREAK FR BTW I HATE HER FAMILY SM(I doubt whether they really are)
UGHH I CAN'T WAIT FOR THE ACT 3
WORDS ARE NOT ENOUGH FOR THIS MASTERPIECE
I WANNA YAP MORE BUT I CAN'T MY HANDS ARE TIRED
AND MY EYES ARE FULL OF TEARS
This has to be one of the best visual novels I've ever played... I have so many things to say that I don't know where to start. (or how to say it, english isn't my first language)
Since I saw that this was inspired by "Dark", I got excited because that series is one of my favorites, and well when I started playing, I'll be honest, at first I got a little confused (very little to be honest, Dark prepared me for this haha) I was confused but also very intrigued and interested, the art... the art is so beautiful, the characters look so cute, so perfect, everything is so beautiful.
SPOILERS I'M GOING TO TALK ABOUT MEGA BIG SPOILERS BELOW
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The feelings I had while playing, I swear I haven't felt them in a long time playing other visual novels. Not only that, but the feeling that I'm not so powerless BUT sometimes powerless at the same time, feeling the characters' lives in my hands...
The sadness I felt when I realized that I could no longer go back in time because the machine was damaged????? I tried like crazy but somehow I felt this couldn't be the end (This happened to me while doing the Hendrix route, at the end) I haven't done the Edmund route yet but it's so painful to know that he also died... both dead for god's sake, they are so dear to meeee, I was saying what the hell is going on?! pulling my hair in front of my laptop.
Obviously I kept playing and well I WAS RIGHT!!!!! NOEL WAS THE PROTAGONIST, FAY, THE MC, ME, US. When we met her and she seemed to know everything about us, then when she said that we weren't going to make it, she said so many suspicious things, all of that made me feel like it was something she had already experienced. Also her appearance, I mean the big scar on her body helped to keep her identity secret, but the vibes she gave me....
AND NOAH, I knew he was the boy we met at the mansion that day, I mean, I suspected because of the color of his eyes, his hair (it's the same style). AND LEON, IS HE NOAH, IS HE THE BOY?. there's only 2 characters (I'm not sure bc I haven't played Edmund's route yet) but I'm sure Noah, and Leon are the only characters in the game which you describe as "thin", "slender" I mean, I remember that the MC was always saying something about how skinny they were, separately of course, one time we described Noah's hand as 'bony" and we said something about Leon being skinny I think, I don't remember well (i might be crazy), but we say the same thing about Noah, the color of their eyes, is the same between them both, one time Noah was talking and he had the dead eyes (without shine), and then suddenly Leon appears and he looks exactly the same..... I THINK THEY ARE THE SAME PERSON BUT I DONT SEE ANHYONE ELSE SAYING IT SO I DONT KNOW WHAT TO THINK IM DUMB
AND AND AND now that I have finished the demo, YOU MEAN TO SAY NOEL is FAY from another world???? (I may need to play again) a world where we ended up in an orphanage as well with NOAH who changed his name to LEON because it was like NOEL but backwards? OH MANNNNN I CAN'T WAIT TO PLAY LEON'S ROUTE GIVE HIM TO MEEEEEEEEEEEEEE, also the true ending in act 2, WE TRAVELED TO ANOTHER WORLD????? that's why Sky looks different, and she was with Lisa too (i smiled so hard when i saw her). HOW IS THIS NEW WORLD GOING TO BE?
Another thing I loved to see, and I find sad at the same time, is LISA!!!! I mean now that i know shes real in another world, I mean, she was probably real in our world too because we met her and she probably died or something? it feels strange to have decided before between "she'll always be with me" or "I'll always be with her" It's like we marked her or something, I chose that she would always be with me, and... that's how it was, she was always there, talking to me, I was talking to another character or investigating something and suddenly she said something.... she is a part of our consciousness, an illusion...
anyways, i would be buying this game the moment it comes out, i would dive myself straight in, my credit card won't even feel it, if i could give this game a thousand stars, i would.
AAAAAAAA JUEGO INCREÍBLE TE AMO. And to the creator, I love your mind, I love your art, I love everything. (I keep on editing this comment, solo quiero expresar bien el amor que siento por este juego😭)
Bro...i always randomly download games from itch but for this game i had to finally make an itch account just so that i cold leave a comment. I have cried SO MANY TIMES and only just completed chapter 6 and I-. I went to the bathroom to just weep. I still gotta do Edmund's route too ;-;. It is so damn good. I make little reviews of games i download on itch on a private discord server by myself just for fun and this game has the LONGEST review ever so far. I dont know if i can ever play another visual novel... SPOILERS BELOW:
So i was SO lost with the prologue and chapter 1. After that i started to understand a little more but im still a little lost. It is so well done that the story is so long and there is really emphasis on every character having importance to a point where the player really builds a personal connection with each one. With the first death of Hendrix I already cried and as he kept on dying i was like realising that his death is inevitable and MC might change when or how he dies but he will die either way and with the end of chapter 6 of him dying and we cant prevent it- I WEPT. Also with Edmund, I lowkey feel guilty when i go with one of the LI's because the poor other one... I have so many questions but I will be finishing this as soon as I get the time and YEAH IM GONNA BUY THE FULL VERSION. Also the fact that the player gets so many questions just makes them want to continue playing so i want to congratulate u on making such a good game
Amazing game - if you like time travel and visual novels, you should definitely play it! The cast is great and MCs relationship with the LIs are all unique in their own way. The art is gorgeous. I was genuinely a little sad when Act 2 ended, because I want everything to be resolved and MC to have a happy life - she's gone through a lot (so have the LIs)!
Act 2 does end in a good place though so don't let the fact that Act 3 hasn't been released stop you from playing. I don't tend to play demos because I don't want to get too attached before full games come out, BUT this isn't a demo. This is 15-20 hours of content, maybe around 60-70% of the game?
My compliments to Cherish for creating this engaging game, and as a solo developer too (people who are talented at both writing AND drawing are really impressive to me). Excited for Act 3!
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I LOVE the proactive MC!!! I created this account to give favorable review to TROT.
MC of TROT is very tough and strives to solve the difficulties. She has experienced many losses. The black coat she wears sometimes reminded me of Eddie's green jacket in Silent Hill 2.
The nonlinear narrative enables the theme of story to be contained within the structure. I really enjoy piecing together the storylines bit by bit. The act 2 gave me a very immersive and intense emotional fluctuation experience.
Can't wait to play act 3!!! TROT has been added to my wish list!!! Gotta get more people to play TROT!!!
made and account just to comment because HOLYYY no other VN has ever made me feel my entire range of emotions in one sitting, i'm super super looking forward to leon's route!!!
I've recently gotten into VNs and this will be my first review ever only for this game. The plot, storytelling, characters, music and art? Beautiful. I can't wait for Act 3!!! I am in love with this hidden gem! Thank you so much for this, Cherish!!!
Each routes for the LIs are heartbreaking as it is heartwarming. T^T
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAABFIEO2HS9FNEIOSBDIWNRJEI FUCK ME THIS WAS SO GOOD!!!!! SOOOOOOO GOOD JESUS FUCKINF CHRIST I KNDISOAJFISOEJUDIRIEIE
I AM. SO EXCITED FOR ACT 3 YOU DONT EVEN KNOWWWWW
IM GONMA LOSE MY MIND
Edit: ok I posted that right after finishing act 2 so I was very excited but im calm now. This is a genuinely amazing game, Im a stone cold bitch but it made me cry multiple times haha, that's practically unheard of. I love it sosososo mmuch. thank you cherish for sharing this with the world
waiting for act 3
So much love was poured into the production of this game, and it’s even more impressive that it’s by a sole creator. Thank you so much Cherish! The art is absolutely delicious and is what hooked me (besides the pretty boys of course ><) but I stayed for the story and characters. I love all of the love interests and the interactions they have with Fay, I was always giggling and kicking my feet. They’re all so cute gosh.
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and then I was shot 87 timesbut seriously, I’m surprised this isn’t more popular. Again, thanks so much for this.
I will be there when Act 3 is here. o7
I don't usually write a comment or reviwe but for this i just thought I HAVE TO
This game is AMAZING!! The storytelling? Amazing, The character writing? Amazing. The art? Amazing! All of it was perfection and I genuinely can't wait for Leon's episode to be released, the moment it drops I'm going to smack all my money into it. This is by far THE best VN I've ever read, I've been replaying it over and over again and at this point I haven't found another VN that has left me as satisfied as this one has! I hope that after this game you plan on doing more in the future! I'd love to see whatever else you can come up with! Thank you so much for this gem of a game, this is true peak writing and I couldn't ask for anything better. I truly love all the characters and can put myself into their shoes quite a lot, which isn't exacctly a good thing but imo it can help people cope with their own issues and make them see that they're not alone so thank you!
join the discord for more updates btw ^_^ (i'm not the creator im js saying loll - we're kind !! :D)
I ASKED HOW FAR WE ARE
THEN THEY SHOWED ME THIS
THAT'S WHEN I REALIZED THAT WE WERE AT PEAK
PEAK WRITING
PEAK ART
PEAK VN
DARE I SAY ONE OF THE BEST VNS I'VE EVER PLAYED
I MEAN, WHERE IS THE CROWD??!!
SPOILER WARNING BELOW!!
Firstly, it took me a very long time to realize that Lisa was a delusion. After choosing that Lisa would be with us forever, I didn’t need to check her profile cuz I thought it was something like our friendship had bonded even more strongly than before. After seeing her a couple of times in irrelevant places, or those “we came to the cafe alone” lines, though having conversations with Lisa, I finally realized the shattering truth. That completely alone made me sob for 15 mins.
AND FREYA AND CICI WLW
THAT WAS UNEXPECTED
This was so well written.
DOOMED YURI AT ITS FINEST
I couldn’t blame Cici after all. It is normal for her to mix memories after a traumatic experience. After all, the mansion has been nothing but good memories to her all this time. She has always searched for love; she believed in love, and Freya, who seemed like the most unlovable, has opened her heart for her. I HATE THOMAS SM. I can’t blame Freya for hating Edmund cuz in her eyes, he is what ruined Cici, what took Cici from her. And Edgar noticed that her mom was loving someone besides him, even more than him, which made him believe that he was not the real one she loved, so after Cici’s death, he perceived her mother’s love as just grief towards Cici; that love was not meant to be his.
ABSOLUTE CINEMA
I can’t say the same for Maria, though. While reading through her diary, still after her 30s, she still seemed like a teenager, chasing through her childish dreams and ignoring what life is really about, avoiding responsibilities. Focusing only on herself, trying to charm everyone around her to achieve her goals. She has never considered Hendrix. I am glad that at least Fay was around with him his whole childhood, so that he never had to face her real side before. I mean, she loves Hendrix, but she cares about her goals more. That's what tore that family apart. Maria is guilty.
AND GOD DAMN I HATE CLAUS SM HE RUINED MY POOR HENDRIX HE DIDN'T DESERVE ANY OF THIS
OMG AND EDMUND
His backstory was pitiful; he had gone through so much in the environment he grew up. To look after her mom, to hear her ramblings about the mansion, all that love bullshit, and still decoying in that small house, poor, desperate. We can’t blame Edmund. Even after returning to the mansion, he still had to face difficulties all over again. Especially with Thomas trying to ruin him.
AND THEY FUCKING DIED WHEN THEY WERE JUST ABOUT TO BE SAVED
OH AND FOR NOAH
Selfless baby xx
My favorite one, who would willingly sacrifice himself for our sake, and did. His love was out of this world. Fay was his savior, the girl of dreams. A dream where you wake up with nothing, inspired by Fay. He chased that dream. He wanted to hold onto her, the only person who accepts him for who he his. They are both strange, as Fay said. The ending where we abandoned him to death… omg… And tbh after all we did, I still wanted to let go of the time machine regardless…Yes, I wished to save them, change the past, save Fay’s fate, and end her suffering. But as Noah said, sometimes we let life continue. That’s human nature itself. I don't wanna sacrifice one person to save two.
THE TROLLEY PROBLEM WAS INSANE
LIKE THE PRINCESS STORY HENDRIX HAD WROTE
The princess who left her place to pursue freedom, only to find everything had vanished, destroyed. Then went on a long journey to end the curse. Only to lose herself in the process, no one in the world would remember her. So much like Noel…
aaaand HERE COMES LEON
BTW I WANNA MENTION THAT WHILE WE WERE IN DUSK WE SAW NOAH AND FAY GOING TO THE ADOPTION CENTER BUT IN REALITY WE NEVER DID… STRANGE
Like those memories, Leon aka Noah(was so obvious from the start, still somehow left me shocked)
Our Noah had dreams?? of us talking about getting adopted by rich parents??
Leon had more???
Us helping him to get out of the locker??
Us playing chess with him??
Him recording our brainwaves???
The memory where we name ourselves Leon and Noel, which Noel has somehow remembered???
HE INVENTED THE FREAKIN TIME MACHINE JUST FOR US
AND IN THE END HE CAME FOR US
AHH THAT GUY IS ROMANTIC AF
And I wonder what exactly happened at the Christmas of ‘08
ig its related to our lost memories
AND THE PERFECT WORLD WHERE LISA EXISTS
SUCH A PLOT TWIST
IDK HOW IS THAT EVEN POSSIBLE
I REMEMBER THAT WE FOUND SOME RESEARCH ABOUT LISA IN LEON’S ROOM, BUT IDK
And mark my words, Lana’s probably dead in this world, just like us.
Cuz Noel was the one who let her stay in her house that night.
AND AS FOR FAY, SHE DIDN'T DESERVE ANY OF THIS
MY GIRL NEEDS A BREAK FR
BTW I HATE HER FAMILY SM(I doubt whether they really are)
UGHH I CAN'T WAIT FOR THE ACT 3
WORDS ARE NOT ENOUGH FOR THIS MASTERPIECE
I WANNA YAP MORE BUT I CAN'T
MY HANDS ARE TIRED
AND MY EYES ARE FULL OF TEARS
This has to be one of the best visual novels I've ever played... I have so many things to say that I don't know where to start. (or how to say it, english isn't my first language)
Since I saw that this was inspired by "Dark", I got excited because that series is one of my favorites, and well when I started playing, I'll be honest, at first I got a little confused (very little to be honest, Dark prepared me for this haha) I was confused but also very intrigued and interested, the art... the art is so beautiful, the characters look so cute, so perfect, everything is so beautiful.
SPOILERS I'M GOING TO TALK ABOUT MEGA BIG SPOILERS BELOW
________________________________
The feelings I had while playing, I swear I haven't felt them in a long time playing other visual novels. Not only that, but the feeling that I'm not so powerless BUT sometimes powerless at the same time, feeling the characters' lives in my hands...
The sadness I felt when I realized that I could no longer go back in time because the machine was damaged????? I tried like crazy but somehow I felt this couldn't be the end (This happened to me while doing the Hendrix route, at the end) I haven't done the Edmund route yet but it's so painful to know that he also died... both dead for god's sake, they are so dear to meeee, I was saying what the hell is going on?! pulling my hair in front of my laptop.
Obviously I kept playing and well I WAS RIGHT!!!!! NOEL WAS THE PROTAGONIST, FAY, THE MC, ME, US. When we met her and she seemed to know everything about us, then when she said that we weren't going to make it, she said so many suspicious things, all of that made me feel like it was something she had already experienced. Also her appearance, I mean the big scar on her body helped to keep her identity secret, but the vibes she gave me....
AND NOAH, I knew he was the boy we met at the mansion that day, I mean, I suspected because of the color of his eyes, his hair (it's the same style). AND LEON, IS HE NOAH, IS HE THE BOY?. there's only 2 characters (I'm not sure bc I haven't played Edmund's route yet) but I'm sure Noah, and Leon are the only characters in the game which you describe as "thin", "slender" I mean, I remember that the MC was always saying something about how skinny they were, separately of course, one time we described Noah's hand as 'bony" and we said something about Leon being skinny I think, I don't remember well (i might be crazy), but we say the same thing about Noah, the color of their eyes, is the same between them both, one time Noah was talking and he had the dead eyes (without shine), and then suddenly Leon appears and he looks exactly the same..... I THINK THEY ARE THE SAME PERSON BUT I DONT SEE ANHYONE ELSE SAYING IT SO I DONT KNOW WHAT TO THINK IM DUMB
AND AND AND now that I have finished the demo, YOU MEAN TO SAY NOEL is FAY from another world???? (I may need to play again) a world where we ended up in an orphanage as well with NOAH who changed his name to LEON because it was like NOEL but backwards? OH MANNNNN I CAN'T WAIT TO PLAY LEON'S ROUTE GIVE HIM TO MEEEEEEEEEEEEEE, also the true ending in act 2, WE TRAVELED TO ANOTHER WORLD????? that's why Sky looks different, and she was with Lisa too (i smiled so hard when i saw her). HOW IS THIS NEW WORLD GOING TO BE?
Another thing I loved to see, and I find sad at the same time, is LISA!!!! I mean now that i know shes real in another world, I mean, she was probably real in our world too because we met her and she probably died or something? it feels strange to have decided before between "she'll always be with me" or "I'll always be with her" It's like we marked her or something, I chose that she would always be with me, and... that's how it was, she was always there, talking to me, I was talking to another character or investigating something and suddenly she said something.... she is a part of our consciousness, an illusion...
anyways, i would be buying this game the moment it comes out, i would dive myself straight in, my credit card won't even feel it, if i could give this game a thousand stars, i would.
AAAAAAAA JUEGO INCREÍBLE TE AMO. And to the creator, I love your mind, I love your art, I love everything. (I keep on editing this comment, solo quiero expresar bien el amor que siento por este juego😭)
可以说是神作了。老师可以考虑加更丰富的音效和配乐，或者live2d图之类的？好像很多次转场都用那个像被打了一拳的音效，感觉有点奇怪......如果有更好的配乐就好了，高潮能够烘托的更好。UI也可以更精美一点？不过其实现在也已经非常非常厉害了，打开游戏之前完全没有想过能看见这样的作品。感觉老师是真的对这个游戏倾注了很多心血，谢谢你让我们看见这样的作品。
在小红书上刷到了老师的账号。希望steam上到时候可以卖贵一点，我们会去买的，老师多给自己赚点钱哈哈。我们都会支持你的，希望你和作品都能越来越好。
外加催更！！！😠
故事叙述得太震撼了...真的很喜欢作者的写作风格和剧情讲述。伏笔和情感铺垫都特别巧妙丝滑，玩完了第一幕和第二幕，好几次剧情都牵动着我内心。人物塑造得很棒，每个角色的故事和性格都很饱满，即使是配角但也刻画的很有意义，有血有肉，有自己他们的独立思考方式和动机，而不是扁平的（比如玛丽亚这个角色）真的很让我惊喜。
谢谢作者大大写出这么有意思的游戏。真的很喜欢里面每一个男主（不过最最喜欢的是诺亚 诺亚你小子呜呜呜）很期待第三幕的故事了！
Bro...i always randomly download games from itch but for this game i had to finally make an itch account just so that i cold leave a comment. I have cried SO MANY TIMES and only just completed chapter 6 and I-. I went to the bathroom to just weep. I still gotta do Edmund's route too ;-;. It is so damn good. I make little reviews of games i download on itch on a private discord server by myself just for fun and this game has the LONGEST review ever so far. I dont know if i can ever play another visual novel... SPOILERS BELOW:
So i was SO lost with the prologue and chapter 1. After that i started to understand a little more but im still a little lost. It is so well done that the story is so long and there is really emphasis on every character having importance to a point where the player really builds a personal connection with each one. With the first death of Hendrix I already cried and as he kept on dying i was like realising that his death is inevitable and MC might change when or how he dies but he will die either way and with the end of chapter 6 of him dying and we cant prevent it- I WEPT. Also with Edmund, I lowkey feel guilty when i go with one of the LI's because the poor other one... I have so many questions but I will be finishing this as soon as I get the time and YEAH IM GONNA BUY THE FULL VERSION. Also the fact that the player gets so many questions just makes them want to continue playing so i want to congratulate u on making such a good game
Amazing game - if you like time travel and visual novels, you should definitely play it! The cast is great and MCs relationship with the LIs are all unique in their own way. The art is gorgeous. I was genuinely a little sad when Act 2 ended, because I want everything to be resolved and MC to have a happy life - she's gone through a lot (so have the LIs)!
Act 2 does end in a good place though so don't let the fact that Act 3 hasn't been released stop you from playing. I don't tend to play demos because I don't want to get too attached before full games come out, BUT this isn't a demo. This is 15-20 hours of content, maybe around 60-70% of the game?
My compliments to Cherish for creating this engaging game, and as a solo developer too (people who are talented at both writing AND drawing are really impressive to me). Excited for Act 3!